Tuesday, October 15, 2019

Heartbreak Comments

Rating: 5.0

Shock rocks through me like shattered ice
It hasn't sank in yet
My throat is beating with my heart
The pain pulsing from my chest through my body
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Emma Sinclair
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Chinedu Dike 16 October 2019

Well expressed thoughts and feelings, very heartfelt with strong emotions. Thanks for sharing.

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Jazib Kamalvi 15 October 2019

Write comment. Such a nice poem, Emma. Read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks

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Emma Sinclair

Emma Sinclair

Auckland, New Zealand
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