Tiara Neal

Rookie (March 31,1990 / Connecticut)

Heartbreak - Poem by Tiara Neal

Something I know to much about.
Thinking you would never break my heart.
But sure enough you did with out a doubt.

What i wish to leave behind.
So here I am flashing back.
Hating that you use to be mine.

You left me crying.
Trying to recope.
You left me dying.

Gettin rid of the hate.
Using rubberbands.
My mistake.

Living in fear.
I dont want to die.
Thinking you cared.

I wish you only knew.
What you meant to me.
And how much i cared about you.

What you left me feeling.

Comments about Heartbreak by Tiara Neal

  • (9/17/2006 5:08:00 PM)

    The structure was so bear...It kept me wanting more from each stanza. though I typically like more of a complex poem, one that makes me think, this wasn't so bad. (Report) Reply

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  • (5/16/2006 11:42:00 PM)

    loved the simple words you used in this poem.
    hearbreak are part and parcel of life...

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  • (5/8/2006 11:53:00 PM)

    Hey Tiara, that's a really powerful poem, some guys can be real cruel. But Try not 2 think about it, it's his loss.

    Keep writing,
    best wishes, from Rissa: -)
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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, April 25, 2006

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