Friday, July 31, 2009

Heat Of Hunger Comments

Rating: 5.0

'Jesus took the Loaves,
Gave thanks,
And distributed them.'
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nimal dunuhinga
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Alison Cassidy 02 August 2009

Your word painting of this pitiful scene is moving and beautifully written. Your final line is particularly poetic. The reader sees it all and weeps. Love Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Sandra Fowler 01 August 2009

A stunning poem picture of poverty and the indifference so often shown to the forsaken among us.10/10 Always your friend, Sandra

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kalubovila East, Sri Lanka
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