House we name for structure
Used for purpose to live in there
It may have spacious lawns
And owner to own
It may be ideal
Loosing grand and real
But no life or soul
As it responds no live call
Yes elegant show is from outside
Big rooms and dining hall to divide
But no human beings to adore
It is vacant and occupied no more
It can be made real home
With cheerfulness and welcome
Wife is occupant and looking after place
Even if hat is small, it is more than palace
House is made with bricks and layers
Home we make with good treatment to offer
The guests and relatives visit with happiness
We too feel great and get shine on face
Children play here and there
Parents are there to look after
Take care and nourish with affection
Home is really heaven for relation
A house is just a house Ventress Chandler-Latham5 hours ago but it becomes a home when family interact there. It can be heavenly if relationships are good
i like Kelly Davis4 minutes ago u got skill Comment +1
Nice B T1 minute ago You miss some words, which really deflated it for me Comment +1
Good idea Hunter Hansen2 minutes ago I like the idea for the poem but it just didn't work for me. Sorry Comment +1
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This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
12 hours ago « Delete » catherine lajul Very educative.