Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 862,193 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

A Place Called

Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

place called “home” is to feel homely,
God’s creation standing by to look so lovely,
May be she is with all her elegance,
Everything for sure and no pretence,

Gently spoken words I hear,
Sounds like music in my ear,
Shivering cold run in spine,
As if showing drunken state caused by wine,

Mild walk around give melancholy voice,
She is with me not becasuse of her choice,
Always standing by and rendering advice,
Suggesting the ways with utmost care to improvise,

Bowing head with all weight on my solder and lean,
Air to suggest fragrance and house almost neat and clean
“Life is so suggestive and perfect” does that mean?
It seems half battle is over with clear perfect win,

Home loses significance if she is not there?
Without her no refuge and to go nowhere,
Ideal place i shome to step in with peace of mind,
Smiling at door to receive with gesture kind

All care is taken of with ease and no tension,
Home in perfect condition and look as Manson,
No clash of views even with slight reason,
All days alike whether season or no season,

With arrival of spring, flowers boom,
All happiness in home and I always zoom,
housing of toys all in single room,
joy and only joy with trace of gloom,

“Home” is an end of universe,
Does not come as surprise and need to rehearse,
It is place where even HE may prefer to stay,
Heaven here, hell here, we need only to create the way


Comments about A Place Called by Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Mahtab BangaleeMahtab Bangalee (2/17/2020 4:24:00 AM)

    Home” is an end of universe//// really a fantastic poem penned(Report)Reply

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  • Abhishek Singh (10/22/2019 8:36:00 AM)

    Home is where the heart is. Good poem sir..(Report)Reply

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  • A B Faniki (9/6/2019 9:30:00 AM)

    Creative simply creative. Thanks for sharing suh lovely piece.(Report)Reply

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  • Sachidananda PandaSachidananda Panda (6/28/2019 11:00:00 AM)

    No clash of views even with slight reason,
    All days alike whether season or no season,

    Excellent...! dear poet. this reflects the theme..liked it..(Report)Reply

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  • Julia Luber (3/17/2019 11:10:00 AM)

    Beautiful reverent poem about home. Beautiful.(Report)Reply

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  • Bhagabat Prasad HottaBhagabat Prasad Hotta (11/12/2018 10:31:00 PM)

    So nice thought....I want to enjoy the nature....10++++++++++++(Report)Reply

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  • REZA HUNTER LION (9/29/2018 8:42:00 AM)

    *************REZA HUNTER LION HERO- - - - - Go Home For in ZERO(Report)Reply

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  • Sochukwu Ivye (10/16/2017 10:37:00 PM)

    Elegant verse, here. So great I was carried by it until it suddenly ended. This is motivational and persuading. Thanks for educating, too, Sir. Nice job.(Report)Reply

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  • Ketan Hukare (7/5/2017 9:06:00 AM)

    Exceptional! ! ! Mesmerizing. What can I say? !(Report)Reply

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  • Richard Wlodarski (1/27/2017 6:43:00 AM)

    Heaven here, hell here, we need only to create the way. And if we create it with love, we'll see it His Way.
    Outstanding poem, sir. Well worth the mighty 10!(Report)Reply

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  • Ernest MakuakuaErnest Makuakua (2/5/2016 7:36:00 AM)

    Home” is an end of universe,
    Does not come as surprise and need to rehearse,
    It is place where even HE may prefer to stay,
    Heaven here, hell here, we need only to create the way

    WELL TOLD POEM

    THANK YOU FOR SHARING(Report)Reply

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  • Adeline FosterAdeline Foster (12/11/2015 10:56:00 AM)

    Home is a great subject for this poem. Read mine - Home Is -
    Adeline(Report)Reply

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  • Twisted StrangeTwisted Strange (3/28/2010 8:32:00 PM)

    This is a very deep beautiful poem.(Report)Reply

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  • Bethany WilliamsBethany Williams (3/20/2010 9:06:00 PM)

    Such beauty in a great poem. Great words used in this poem.. I had such a great time reading this....10+++(Report)Reply

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  • Chitra - (1/29/2010 10:00:00 PM)

    A 10++ for sure. A beautiful write about the place where we find happiness and solace!(Report)Reply

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  • Prince Obed de la CruzPrince Obed de la Cruz (1/25/2010 10:20:00 AM)

    i am the 100th person to rate this one... i gave it a 10... it's so good.(Report)Reply

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  • Lean Punio (1/2/2010 2:03:00 AM)

    a home is a place that you will find love and care...
    respect and peace are there when i go home...
    i'm going home now co'z i found the emptiness when i'm alone
    every single minutes my home keeps waiting for me to go back! ! !
    beautiful poem! ! !
    I'm going home! !(Report)Reply

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  • Gul naz (12/19/2009 1:45:00 PM)

    a fact no one can deny............10/10(Report)Reply

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  • Liz Annson (12/13/2009 11:00:00 PM)

    a place called house is where we stay
    a place called home is what we make
    thank you for sharing this with us... a beautiful poem(Report)Reply

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  • Sahar Sahar (12/6/2009 2:44:00 AM)

    A beautifuly described structure of home and its atmosphere, we dwell, with our life, ....with all serene and tranquil breaths.......(Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, June 4, 2009

Poem Edited: Monday, June 20, 2011