(heaven) (Hell) Poem by neil derek singleton

(heaven) (Hell)

Rating: 3.5


Loving past hurts so much.
Heaven was so near, but you couldn't touch.
Warm butterflys around the heart glowing.
fresh air in lungs flowing.
Breathing the rose's of blossom.
She walks away.
Your head begins to sway.
Heart stops beating.
Soul is heavely eatten.
Blood taste like poison.
Organs dieing.
Tears off crying.
World stops.
Life beigins.
Hell not heaven.

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Cortez Mccall 06 February 2010

very direct bro really good read very well put.

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Cortez Mccall 06 February 2010

very direct bro really good read very well put.

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