Heavenly Smile Poem by Alter Ego

Heavenly Smile

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It's his smile that gets me
So innocent and lovely
I could tell he loves me
and I still remember
that sweet and loving smile.
When he looks at me
When he hugs me
I feel he loves me..
Yet I know love is so young..
and love is not in full bloom...
Like the rose that is picked too early
so innocent.
so new,
to me...
Love is a game
and I lost
I lost his heavenly smile.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

We need to talk about all of these. nice write though.

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 30 April 2009

love will smile again.............................Good Write..........

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Omar Ibrahim 30 April 2009

you lost.but you can start a new game.......the poem is perfect.keep on writing.

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Ultimate X 30 April 2009

:) i like it............

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