Hell On Earth Comments

You can truly feel fear and desperation in this peace. An insight to the torture experience by the very body meant to nurture and protect. Difficult piece to read for those reasons. Well expressed, Mai. Thank you for sharing!

You poor children, so misled by those who are misled. Tell me please, that you were able to outgrow such cruel treatment. Read mine - We the Unencumbered - Adeline

Life needs peace than war! ! ! Nice work.

Great poem

lovely words and IM sure correct mai