Tuesday, February 7, 2006

Hello Its Me Are You There? Comments

Rating: 5.0

hello again
i need someone to talk to
i feel like a defective toy
like a truck with no wheels
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Jerry Hughes 17 April 2008

Rise above it - you know you can so do it!

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Ndidi Ubogu 07 February 2006

this is a sweet and sad poetry, i guess. but i hope the story behind this poem is not what i am thinking. you poetically expressed the sad feeling in you but at the end you made it a bit confusing, and i like it that way.it is a very nice poem and i want you to keep it up.

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