Bushra Hassan

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Helpless - Poem by Bushra Hassan

Had the experience of hell again......
Again dropped myself to a bottomless pit.....
A pit which will remain unseen...
Unseen to the naked eye....
Far from the hearts of heartless peopl....
No hands their to reach my dead cordis.....
All i had der r pleasing and surprizing eyes....
Crying on my condition...
Gossiping about ma helpless soul...
I tried to raise ma voice...
Calm their surprise and
shout nothing to worry about i am fine.......

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Poet's Notes about The Poem

I jus met an accidnt....n peopl around me were crying on ma condition

Comments about Helpless by Bushra Hassan

  • Jazib Kamalvi (10/21/2017 3:11:00 AM)


    A sublime start with a nice poem, Bushra. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you. (Report) Reply

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  • Saadat Tahir (1/24/2013 11:55:00 PM)


    like a squalid dreary dream in the pits of hollow realms...
    like a scene from a forgotten movie....ten thousand leagues under the netherworld...

    liked it
    nice flow
    u shd write more...
    blessings
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, January 24, 2013



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