Tuesday, September 26, 2017

Her Broken Heart Comments

Rating: 5.0

At the verge of tranquil water, sitting like an owl
Whole of the nature is calm but storms in soul.

By saying to her 'bye', her heart someone broke.
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S.D. TIWARI
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Kumarmani Mahakul 30 September 2017

Whole of the nature is calm but storms in soul... this is the main theme of the poem. A beautiful poem on sad love with touching expression and nice collocation. Thanks a lot.

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Rajnish Manga 26 September 2017

Tale of a tormented heart with a baggage of pain for a life time. Thanks.

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