Tuesday, September 1, 2009

Her Laugh Comments

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The sound of her voice brightens my eyes
and elevates the corners of my mouth

We talk about this, about that
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White Knight
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Bert Bell 11 November 2010

I like this poem very much. You say many lovely things in a few well-crafted lines. You've painted nice images with your words and I like your use of metaphor. Very nice indeed.10

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Joseph Poewhit 01 September 2009

Really nice poem with feelings

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