Her Wishes Poem by Clive Culverhouse

Her Wishes

Rating: 5.0

solitude
... quiet
black peppercorn
on a ribbon
of tagliatelle
I, on my path
sinuous striding
impelled by you
impaled by you

Tuesday, October 24, 2023
Topic(s) of this poem: her,wish,path,life,mother earth,world,universe
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Her Wishes poem by Clive Culverhouse
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Clive Culverhouse 27 October 2023

I put this poem on PoetrySoup, here's a comment 'A temptress eating pasta - how aspirational! I'm not sure if impaled involves a fork... I liked the wordplay here'

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