Hidden Worlds Beyond Poem by Clive Culverhouse

Hidden Worlds Beyond

Rating: 5.0


nights
of black
- - maybe - -
but it's in
an anytime -
the float
of tingling
like bees buzzing
blurred wings on lips
that show
purple moments
where the
darkness lives

Sunday, August 5, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: meditation,reality
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Soran M. H 08 June 2020

well done sir This poem is distinguished in several ways, including: rare subject, strong and new poetic images, use of the artistic writing style, deep and significance content, etc.... and all of these can only be done by someone with good experience writing good poetry. Congratulations 10/10

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Clive Culverhouse 08 June 2020

Thanks for your time, Soran, ..

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Soran M. H 08 June 2020

the float of tingling like bees buzzing blurred wings on lips

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Clive Culverhouse 08 June 2020

sweet., , .

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Soran M. H 08 June 2020

the float of tingling like bees buzzing blurred wings on lips ……………… This poem is distinguished in several ways, including: rare subject, strong and new poetic images, use of the artistic writing style, deep and significance content, etc.... and all of these can only be done by someone with good experience writing good poetry. Congratulations 10/10

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Clive Culverhouse 08 June 2020

Thank you for your kind supportive words, Soran, much appreciated., , , ,

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Kayode Are 05 August 2018

Sustains the hint of mystery in a succinct cloud of few words.

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Clive Culverhouse 05 August 2018

Appreciate your comment, thanks]]

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