Wednesday, June 4, 2008

Hey Dad... Comments

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Hey dad...
I don't know what to say
I don't know what to think of this
Now all I do is pray...
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Ryan Joseph Holder
Dad
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~ Jon London ~ 07 June 2008

Ryan, This is a very emotional piece of fine poetry....I could feel each painfully penned line...superb poet....*10* all the best Jon

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Ron Flowers 04 June 2008

Ryan, you've written a very sad poem and you've written very well. I can feel your pain as I read it. Ron

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Ryan Joseph Holder

Ryan Joseph Holder

Miami, Florida
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