valeria gomez

Rookie (el cenizo, tx / laredo, tx)

Hidden Feelings - Poem by valeria gomez

the light is getting dim
but when i see him
everything gets bright
i'm amazed at the sight
of the glow of his face
that my heart starts to race
his eyes and his smile
are enough to keep me happy even if just for a while
all i want is to see him happy
even if it means my heart feeling crappy
he's one of the reasons i want to live
and i just want to give
him all the love i feel
for him and show him that it's real
if he would only give me just one chance
i would give him that one last dance


Comments about Hidden Feelings by valeria gomez

  • (7/31/2011 3:17:00 AM)


    Nice feel and flow like a crystal cascade movement...10++ (Report) Reply

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  • Urshula Davis (7/14/2011 3:10:00 PM)


    Nice and please don't be unhappy for someone cause that will mess u up in the long run! But nice poem good choice of words! Keep writing! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, May 19, 2011

Poem Edited: Thursday, July 14, 2011


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