valeria gomez

Rookie (el cenizo, tx / laredo, tx)

Gone - Poem by valeria gomez

tears slowly run down these eyes
been hurt for the last time by your lies
not ready to let go of you
but far apart we grow
with each passing day
it gets difficult for me to stay
you tell me you love me
and i trust you blindly
thinking your words are true
but pain you put me through
then you say sorry and feel bad
well i'm sorry you wasted what we had
i thought you were one of a kind
but you stabbed me from behind
left me there to die
from the poison of your lie
i just hope you find what you're looking for
because you are no longer welcome to my door...


Comments about Gone by valeria gomez

  • Ramesh Rai (5/6/2012 11:11:00 PM)


    Sad but beautiful. no matter, the life is so, does not stop. keep it on. (Report) Reply

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  • (5/5/2012 11:49:00 PM)


    Wow! This is one of those sad and painful poems, written with not a pen but a tear drop, it really is very profound and draws so many emotions to the reader, I really thank you for sharing this poem, worthy to be digested, great!

    The_African_Son
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  • Romeo Della Valle (4/29/2012 2:37:00 PM)


    Sad but beautifully crafted! Outburst of the heart that can be deeply felt through this amazing write! We all go through this painful situation as we learn our lessons in life and move on toward new horizons! Through writing we can release the pain we suffered and you have done very well my dear! 10+++ Thank you for sharing and keep it up! Valeria! I have been there many times and I survived and such are you! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, April 17, 2012

Poem Edited: Tuesday, April 17, 2012


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