Hidden Semantics Poem by Neera Lollbeeharry

Hidden Semantics

Rating: 5.0


Hidden semantics of deep desires
flow through the bodies silent.
Words beyond words float
to and fro between us.
Mazes of meanings,
Riddles, subtleties,
veiled daringness,
temper the wild.
Waves flowing
deep inside
gush soft
liquid
warmth
that seeps in,
gradually melting
ice-captured hearts.
Invisible breaths infuse
new life to remote feelings.
All this while, unknown to all
hidden within this ocean of words
grows a new silent, meaningful intensity

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 31 October 2017

Deep emotions expressed with wonderful command of the language. Good work, very realistic description. Thanks for sharing Neera.

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Khairul Ahsan 03 May 2014

This is a great piece of poem, as also a great piece of art. The lay out of the lines is extra ordinary, drawing a hidden picture that captures the eye at the word 'liquid', coincidentally meaningful!

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Neera Lollbeeharry 12 December 2015

Thank you for your appreciation. Sometimes inspiration makes you do wonders.

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