Hidden Tears Poem by Aidan Nielsen

Hidden Tears

Rating: 4.5


If I were to tell you about my hidden tears,
you would begin to see my hidden fears,
but to see those fears you must use your ears,
to listen but aswell to look,
then maybe you could see my true colours glisten,
glisten in the dull gray light that surrounds me,
but thats what allows us to be free,
that dull gray light is what keeps away your hidden fears,
you can choose to hide it for years and years,
and let no-one see your fears,
but those dull lifeless years,
are created by your hidden tears.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Romeo Della Valle 23 April 2012

Wow! At your age, you can write this deep? Amazing my dear friend and WELCOME to the Poetry World! You have made an impressive entrance into this fabulous World of Poetry! This powerful and touching write clearly shows your potential to make to the top of the Poetry World one day if you continue sharing your thought provoking writes with the World! 10+++ Thank you for sharing and keep it up! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City!

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