Monday, September 9, 2013

Hiding Behind The Mask Comments

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Paper faces playing make believe, if only for a night
They don't know, and how could they?
The one they dance with is poor
The one they kiss is in a broken marriage
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Ellia Keil
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Ellia Keil 10 September 2013

@Lyn Paul....I tried to do that so thank you! Though I couldn't find the wording I wanted for bathroom....so I went with ladies room.....that's the only part that annoys me on this poem

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Lyn Paul 10 September 2013

Alot put into these words written forever ago. Well done

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Ellia Keil

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