High Tide Poem by Alyssa Long

High Tide



Your current is
Too strong to resist.

Your tide keeps
Pulling me in
Further and further
From the shore,

But I refuse
To fight this undertow.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sam Fitts 09 May 2009

Giving up without a fight? That doesn't sound like you at all

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Gwendolyn Miller 08 May 2009

Gees, so many things are applicable to this poem. I like how you phrased this poem. 'Too' strong is definately a true statement, but one that maybe we should understand ourselves first....

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