Friday, September 5, 2008

Hippopotamus Comments

Rating: 5.0

'Why you struggle so much my friend over there?
Please come to Africa in an auspicious time
And I'll do piggyback along the river Nile,
Then you feel like a King in the Congo jungle.'
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nimal dunuhinga
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Sandra Fowler 06 September 2008

Your love for animals is endearing. Written with sensitivity and grace. As always, Sandra

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Alison Cassidy 06 September 2008

The subject of your poem is magnificent. Your poem is original, unusual and superbly crafted. Your poetic eye is succinct and filled with irony. Another fascinating poem. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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kalubovila East, Sri Lanka
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