Monday, April 12, 2010

Hold Me Close Comments

Rating: 4.5

Hold me close
Don't take your eyes off me
I know
I'll go slow
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Tondalaya Jefferson
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John W. McEwers 12 April 2010

I really like this poem. It sounds kind of Bluesy. But I think your structure is really cool.

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