Greg Allum

Rookie (03/10/1977)

Hold Tight - Poem by Greg Allum

My quiet
weakened voice calls out.
Screams
in the darkness
I listen for an echo
but only silence remains
I awake, covered
in sweat, feeling your body next to mine
I pat the sheets and
the realisation hits
I am alone. I am so alone
and you are the sound
I long to hear


Comments about Hold Tight by Greg Allum

  • Deborah Cromer (12/13/2009 7:49:00 AM)


    I read this and your lines are interesting. This poem has potential. You have the right idea. Good choices of words. I like the idea of an echo. Debbie (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, December 13, 2009



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