Sunday, December 13, 2009

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My quiet
weakened voice calls out.
Screams
in the darkness
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Greg Allum
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Deborah Cromer 13 December 2009

I read this and your lines are interesting. This poem has potential. You have the right idea. Good choices of words. I like the idea of an echo. Debbie

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