Wednesday, July 30, 2008
Holding On Comments
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On a sheet of glass i stand
holding this cold flesh in my hand
suspended dangerously amist clouds and sky
should i hold on or should i fly
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Alancia Lebogang Mogorosi
13 August 2008
lovely poem Will lovely, i like the poetic device you used.
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3/12/2026 1:03:51 PM # 1.0.0
i love the transition you write your poems; first broken then holding on and you express hope even with hate overflowing. hmmm... very passionate to the point of anger. that's unreciprocated love. beautiful poem.