Hole In Me Poem by Lu Vernezze

Hole In Me



If you left me
I'd be empty
You'd leave a hole in me

I couldn't get over
The fact that it's over
You'd leave a hole in me

That's my greatest fear
You leaving me here
You'd leave a hole in me

It would kill
The hole would never fill
You'd leave a hole in me

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Fil LeBoeuf 24 September 2006

Wow! That repetition works so well! Even the 'over' and 'over' again I think works well. Nice. ~Fil

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