Home Poem by Jenna Marie

Home

Rating: 5.0


My house is a....
new book there are many surprises inside,
it is like a..
great friendly giant it may look intimidating but inside it is filled with love and kindness,
my house is the heart of my family it is always working to keep our relationships alive..
it is a like a life saver on a boat in the oceans of life it is always there to save us if we fall..
it is a like a hug from a mother, always warm and welcoming..
it is like water as we are plants it always will nurture us,
my house is a puppy it wont judge me for what I have done,
it is like a song on replay it never changes..
it is like a canvas you can paint it all you want but it will always be a canvas...
it is a jacket it keeps me warm and cozy...
my house is a ocean it has many different species...
it is a bandage it is always there to help heal our wounds..
it is a lighthouse it will always help us find our way back to our family if we get lost in life..
it is a cheesecake always rich in flavor...
my house is a jungle full of many different noises...
it is like a doctor it will always strive to keep us health..
it is like the sunset beautiful...
it is a work of art it should be appreciated..
my house is an eagle it is watchful...
it is like your favorite food familiar and comforting..
it is a brick wall it protects you..
it is a melody peaceful and calming...
my home is a rare species it should be preserved...
it is a school i have learned many things in it
it is a net it will always be there when i fall down
it is a boat it helps me sail across the seas of life
my home is like a memory it will never be forgotten.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

I like how you go from 'my house' at the begining to 'my home' at the end. Very nice. I wish my house was like that.

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Steven Aragon 05 November 2009

You have a beautiful house. Can no one foreclose it and kick you out on the streets. Really enjoyed 10^

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Allan O 28 October 2009

very lovely..now this one i really enjoyed reading...10++ thank you

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