Home Sweet Home! Poem by savina liyanage

Home Sweet Home!

Rating: 5.0


I look back at the old house for the last time
I could here it's sorrowful cries, begging and pleading us to stay
I hopped into car with a sad, drooping face
Now there was nothing stopping my parents from moving
Driving, driving, driving and more driving
Arriving at our destination, I gaped
I could speak out one word, AMAZING!
This is my new, HOME SWEET HOME

Saturday, December 19, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: home
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 10 April 2019

Home at last! ! Home sweet Home. Thanks for your commet on my poem. Stay blessed always.

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Chinedu Dike 26 January 2016

Beautiful depiction of home sweet home - a heaven for beginners, well articulated and insightfully penned with conviction. A lovely portrayal of the inherent joy and essence of a happy beautiful home. Thanks for sharing Savina. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Savina Liyanage 22 February 2016

Sure. No prob's

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Dr Antony Theodore 23 January 2016

Arriving at our destination, I gaped I could speak out one word, AMAZING! This is my new, HOME SWEET HOME Amazing sweet home. encountering in the new something very very special and adjusting to it. After a cry deep and astonishing reality. thank you for this poem. tony

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 19 December 2015

How amazing it is! Its wonderful to see the way Savi expresses his emotions so genuinely and lucidly. Thank you Savi for amazing us this way. Full marks from me.

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