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The yellow beaked vultures were waiting.
A cloth bag contains the bleached
remains; his father.
Impeccable gift unmasked.
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Satish Verma
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Priyanka Bhowmick 09 November 2009

wonderful lines Sir...and the script has been excellently penned down.

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Catrina Heart 09 November 2009

A stunning metaphorical stanza's..Hats off to you sir! ! ! Thanks a million to your Hundred Moons...........I am so much overwhelmed! ! !

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