Honesty Poem by Vasudhasudhakar pulukuri

Honesty



Honesty is really great thing

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Honesty is really great thing
really only few people are in
the honesty way........
when we truly recognize our
mistake and realize that
in perfect way its really
a great feeling...
only some people are built with that
heart.............................
some people may not realize there
mistakes and they are in insufficient way
so no one can change their characters too...
so be honest and be a good person in life
no one can touch you......
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Michael Round 21 July 2012

Not thoughtful enough to be a poem. This could have been written as a thought... a few sentences... except that the sentences would be bereft of punctuation. Not clever enough... this item should be worked on. It is not enough to just through some words together. The lines and line breaks are neither here nor there and do not carry or add to the weight of the basic idea which is... perhaps if you tell the truth you do not have to remember anything.

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