Tuesday, September 2, 2008

Hope To Die! Comments

Rating: 4.0

The day I was drowning
of the situation I was thinking
about the time when you said
'Goodbye' without knowing
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norchel baguanga
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Greenwolfe 1962 25 September 2008

I recommend the poem because I thought the ending was well done. The rest of it was nothing special, but the ending made the reader feel the hurt. Grenwolfe 1962

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Norchel Baguanga 25 September 2008

^^, dOnT wOrRy! ! ! this is only what i felt last year ^^, ok i make one, but more emotion... LoL^^, sorry but this what i always thought......

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Manonton Dalan 15 September 2008

hey! hold on to that thought. the world is so beautiful to live in. get a new one... more beautiful one. she's out there close to you. write some more please. thanks for not dying. somebody needs you.

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