Hope, You Are Fine Poem by Mausumi PramanikMouSun

Hope, You Are Fine

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Hope, you are fine
Mausumi Pramanik(MouSun)

Hope you are fine,
You are now staying far from me
As you are not mine.
You are keeping busy yourself
So you don't have much time
To Remember all those moments
We were spending together
With a glass of red wine.
So you never bother to ask,
"Dear…How do you do? "
And I also never reply to annoy,
"What's about you? "

I'm spending my day, however I desire
The restless nights are much more adorable,
I don't want to spoil them in blunder.
As time and tide wait for none.
I've plenty work to accomplish,
Very less…Whatever has been done.

That romantic candlelight dating was thrilling
That light is yet to be put off…
The flame of light are spreading
Out here and there… All over the society
Everywhere…from small town to villages
Large number of crowd are gathering
Sinking in the miserable darkness.


Your footprints are now out of scene
My violin begins to be played in doleful tune
The garden adorned by you has been destroyed…
The buds as well as the flowers have been dried…
After you left the home for your own selfish wish
The south facing window was open by a blissful miss
The rain drops come through…all of a sudden
All the memories are washed out for ever
Then…I take a deep breath…in peace
And I feel very much lighter than a feather.

Hope, You Are Fine
Friday, June 8, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: love and life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajnish Manga 08 June 2018

The words do create an emotional rhapsody. The images pierce through the heart of the reader, The concluding part lends it a dramatic ending with hope out there to change the narrative of life. The maturity of your style leaves a lasting impression. Thanks.

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Mausumi Pramanik 08 June 2018

Thank u so much. It means a lot.......

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