Hopeless Poem by Hayley Foster

Hopeless

Rating: 4.5


I’m all alone in a room that’s dark,
Fighting the urge to add another mark
My tears are flowing, my thoughts collide,
And the end result I’ll have to hide

I’m battered, bruised, and all alone,
Unable to fight this on my own
Friends used to help me through the day,
But they saw my pain and ran away

I’m growing weaker as the days pass,
Afraid today might be my last
I know the next move is up to me,
Asking for help is the only key

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gold Fish 21 October 2009

You sound like you are in a real state of despair. My heart goes out to you for times as these are filled with pain and drenched with tears. I encourage you to take the time to read some of my poems, so you can see that the dark times are mixed with some brighter more hopeful times. Start with 'Tides of Change' and the rest you will be able to identify by their titles.

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