Hopscotch (Haiku) . Poem by Azriel Dreams

Hopscotch (Haiku) .



Hop across a gap;
lose it fair and square;
Hopscotch.

Azriel

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
David Munene wa Kimberly 10 April 2010

Hi pal. Sorry, but I don't get how yours is a Haiku, but it should be 5-7-5 syllable. Your last line is just 2! Effort.

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