Azriel Dreams

Rookie (Died in a Fire and reborn as a Reaper / A Town called Passion)

Hopscotch (Haiku) . - Poem by Azriel Dreams

Hop across a gap;
lose it fair and square;
Hopscotch.

Azriel


Comments about Hopscotch (Haiku) . by Azriel Dreams

  • David Munene wa Kimberly (4/10/2010 9:57:00 AM)


    Hi pal.
    Sorry, but I don't get how yours is a Haiku, but it should be 5-7-5 syllable. Your last line is just 2!

    Effort.
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Poem Submitted: Saturday, April 10, 2010



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