Horses In The Rain Poem by Cathe Ferguson

Horses In The Rain

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Rain rioted down cannons
and barrels of flesh.
It dripped into stockings,
rinsed stars white and fresh;
poured on the bays and
ran down their docks,
watered the chestnut
and the appy's bright spots.
It mixed with the paint
'til its patches were soaked,
and filled all the rills
where frogs never croaked
but hid in the mud
among crescent tracks
made by the gruellas,
the claybanks and blacks.

(This was written January 27,2005)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alto Thomas Jr 24 February 2008

This wonderful poem gets better every time I read it.

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Cathe Ferguson 08 April 2017

Thank you! What a nice thing to say!

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Mary Gordley 19 February 2008

Cathe, a lot of clever work is incorporated here, I wonder if even horse people will get all the double meanings? It took the second read before I got some of them (where frogs never croaked) very clever write.

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Cathe Ferguson 08 April 2017

Thank you for taking the time to catch the meanings! !

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