Sunday, March 5, 2006

Horses In Winter Comments

Rating: 4.0

Five icy beasts,
Steam rising up from their backs
And from their curious noses,
Bright-eyed and quizzical,
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Grace Miller
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Mike Finley 05 March 2006

I think this is beautiful - you really get the phsyicality of the horses right - but you haven't ended it yet. There's something better waiting to be said, I think.

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