Vanish Windows

Hot Stuff - Poem by Vanish Windows

My lover whips off his trousers,
my eyes open wider,
hot steam rises....
I lick my lips,
what comes next...
smile to myself
as he irons out every crease...
what an aphrodisiac....
a man who does his own

In the garden
the bamboo agrees,
nodding in the wind.

Comments about Hot Stuff by Vanish Windows

  • Neil Marsden (10/15/2008 5:13:00 AM)

    Super name, terrific proifile, fantastic poem!

    You are a very talented writer and your style is a breath of fresh air to poetry in general and in person to me - love it! Neil M.

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  • C H Sund (10/10/2008 12:49:00 PM)

    I iron mine too but I must remember next time to do it in the company of my wife! lol Another fun read with a twist. (Report)Reply

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  • Sarvesh Kulkarni (10/10/2008 11:43:00 AM)

    Amazing. I never thought anyone could put such humour in poems. Thanks. (Report)Reply

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  • Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black (10/10/2008 10:19:00 AM)

    I love your sense of humour.good comparison with the bamboo-very erotic-but i hate ironing so i leave the chores to my hubby-I finally got him house trained even though he was stubborn at first.-I'm just kidding! ! ! ! ! Your poems are a real surprise.Keep writing the funny stuff. (Report)Reply

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  • Janice Windle (10/4/2008 12:02:00 PM)

    This is great, Vanish! You put into words what all of us feel about ironing - and about lovers - brilliant! He sounds too good to be true! If he becomes available, please let me be the first to be told - he could help me out perhaps... (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, October 4, 2008

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