How Can I? Poem by Joezel Jayme

How Can I?

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How Can I undo my past
 and change my mistake?
How can I undo it 
and at a same time redo it?
How can I do it now 
when I know that you are already gone?

Friday, June 19, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: question
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
One time during my gen psych class. Undo and Redo came up into my mind and I tried to write something about that two word so I came up writing this.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Adeline Foster 19 June 2015

Ah_ the age old wish. Read mine If Only A must read Adeline

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Susan Lacovara 19 June 2015

The need for a do-over, sometimes keeps us from moving on to the next best path. I have, actually I AM, currently asking myself the same questions your poem offers. Hindsight haunts me. Quite a good write. PEACE

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Joezel Jayme 19 June 2015

Thanks for reading this :)

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