How I Feel Poem by Argenis Rivera

How I Feel

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When you know they deserve better.
When you know that you're willing to do anything for them to see them smile since it hurts you when they dont.
When thinking about being with them forever doesnt scare you.
When knowing that you can die at anytime and know they feel the same makes dying less frightful.
Yet when they choose the person that brings them pain.
You just cant help but wonder why.
I care for you more than i cared for anyone else.
Its not a sacrifice if i want to do it.
The only sacrifice i will ever make is seeing someone who can make you happier than i could.
But even then i would be content.
Because youre happy, and thats all i ever want you to be.
With or without me.
And that is how i really feel about you

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
i grew up since i joined this site. i had many chances at love but, none quite like this. i am 20 now, which is a far cry from when i started, and i have a new mentality on live and love. this isnt a poem more as it is my feelings for someone i truly care about put into words. she is someone i will always love and i hope that one day we will both be happy together. What i wrote here is the exact words i sent her. i do not regret my actions because when you know you love someone you just know. sorry for the informality
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Indranil Bhaduri 01 October 2012

Lovely penning of feelings....Great job! !

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