How I Knew You? Poem by eden demessie

How I Knew You?

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I have known you my whole life
you were all that i have
you brightned my day
you were the hero of my life

you just left the world
like you never once lived
i hate you for hiding
all the pain you were feeling

all that time you were laughing
i didn't know you were bleeding
now you left me crying
with all the loneliness i am facing

I tried to erase
all the times we spent
all the games we played
all the secrets we shared
but how could i forget
the one promise we made
that we will never separate
i hope you can have
all the eternity peace
we might meet one day
if i follow your lead

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alem Hailu G/kristos 30 November 2015

I think your lover has ceased to be before you know what was happening! what an interesting work.The way you expressed it via word pictures is also nice keep it up!

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Zufan Kassa 25 June 2009

you did a great job.

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~ Jon London ~ 18 June 2009

Very touching piece, you've expressed your emotion well...the sofness of your voice delivers the poem with impact....great work...keep expressing you have a gift...use it wisely

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