How Many Poems I Go Writing Poem by Sumita Jetley

How Many Poems I Go Writing



like leaves they shall fly away
weather they may change

sun they may shine
or go to their fate

Still, the question remains the same
How much is locked in me

will be exhausted
or created

The words that i lock in
rhymes
how much would they stay
not stay


irrespective of
what i would say

i may be prejudiced if i say
not say

see and unsee
let thoughts stray

Tuesday, July 16, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: poems
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
there is paucity and positivity
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aniruddha Pathak 16 July 2019

Like leaves they shall fly away, ... but let my thoughts stray. A nice piece no doubt, but there is a deluge of words, words, words, good, not so good, and indifferent.

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