Thursday, February 22, 2018

Humanity Strips Comments

Rating: 5.0

Children of nine and ten,
tender and scared
frozen in fear,
blood smeared.
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Chaitali Bose Bhattacharjee
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Dr Dillip K Swain 22 February 2018

A lovely poem...tender expression of this poem makes it endearing! My favorite lines are the first six lines of your poem: Children of nine and ten/tender and scared/frozen in fear/blood smeared/Weeping anxiously/terror stricken tear. Very adorable piece of work.....appreciated....10

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