Friday, January 5, 2018

Hunger. Comments

Rating: 5.0

"You're not hungry." Echoes through your head.
"Stop don't look." The voices say.
"Don't you dare eat the apple." They say
"Stop, you already had too much today." They scream in your head.
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Jinna Windsor
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Jazib Kamalvi 06 January 2018

A good start with a nice poem, Jinna. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 05 January 2018

Jinna, such an interesting poem...10+++

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