Hungover Poem by Ellie Foe

Hungover

Rating: 5.0


Last year I blacked out.
This year I'm hungover.
Empty footsteps and empty words.

I want me to myself and just be here,
the light gives me a migraine.
But if you want me more, I'll be there.
Just for you.

Static clouds my brain and eyes,
There's no signal.
Just turn me off.

Pretending to care,
or pretending to not.

Sleep deprived,
Emotion deprived,
Peace deprived
Vessels stroll the halls.

Maybe I'll be sober next year.

Friday, November 30, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: care,cloudy,depression,emptiness,eyes,high school,mind,sad,sigh,sleep
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This isn't about alcohol...I've never even tried alcohol. I assume being hungover is the best comparison to my mind currently.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 21 August 2019

such a nice piece of work, Ellie. You may like to read my poem, Love and L u s t. Thanks.

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Kelly Kurt 30 November 2018

I a am an alcoholic. But it isn't about alcohol either. Keep writing and thinking.

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Ellie Foe 30 November 2018

I've actually never had alcohol, it was just a comparison. But thank you for the encouragement.

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