Hurting An Trying To Love Poem by deanna mcgee

Hurting An Trying To Love



l lov you but i all so lov him siting looking an hopen that he looks my way i think about u in the back of my mind is this right is this rong sould i be doing time. Sould i stop loving you cuz you hurt me like no other man should i lat u go an we just be friend. Loven him is better then loven you i tryed an tryed to be happy with you but your just not that dude so im lating you go hope you find some one like me some one that ture

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Guess who's back Angel Wade 06 November 2009

THIS IS A NICE POEM BUT YOU GOT ALOT OF MISTAKES U SHOULD GO BACK THROUGH THEM AND RE-READ IT AND FIX THEM AND PUT LESS WORDS ON EACH LINE.. THIS ANGEL READ SOME OF MY POEMS I THINK YOU WILL LIKE THEM

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