Wednesday, March 23, 2011

Hush Little Baby Its Alright.(Religous/Sad) Comments

Rating: 5.0

hush little baby,
pleas don't cry,
god has a place for you,
up in the sky,
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Poet of the River
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Kevin Patrick 01 December 2011

I like this one its very melancholic, and bittersweet, I like that you took the old nursery rhyme, its very dark subject matter, and I like the boldness of what you are saying with grit and warmth. Great work Ashleigh

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Poet of the River

Poet of the River

California, but move around a lot.
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