Hyperventilate Poem by JeT Campe

Hyperventilate

Rating: 5.0


(Motivated by dreams and nightmares that have haunted me for years)

I wanted to learn who you really are,
I needed the chance to stitch up my scars,
I'm closer to you than i was in the start,
So dive right in and tear me apart...

I wanted to learn about the dark side of you,
you bring me down like a bottle of pills,
I hate the way that your making me feel,
I keep coming back i never give in...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alicia Phillips 13 May 2009

i think this is a fantastic poem

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Tailor Bell 11 May 2009

strong work, JeT, pulses with energy...takes one right up to the edge wondering. keep posting. -Tailor

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