Tuesday, August 8, 2017

I Am Comments

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I Am

I am the gentle breeze that blows through your hair on a hot Summer day.
I am the vibrant flower that blooms for you in the month of May.
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Jackie Bush Holcomb
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Doris Cornago 10 August 2017

Truly heart-felt. Thanks, Jackie. :)

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Rini Shibu 08 August 2017

Jackie superb writing.. I loved it Your poem made me breathless till the end Am everything surrounds you and touches your soul. This poem will go to my favorite list.. +++10

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Jackie Bush Holcomb 08 August 2017

Thank you!

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Lamar Cole 08 August 2017

Very wonderful poem with very wonderful imagery.

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Jackie Bush Holcomb 08 August 2017

Thank you.

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Very beautiful and spiritual..great poem a ten from me..

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Jackie Bush Holcomb 08 August 2017

Thank you. I wrote it for my friend and his family who tragically lost their 14 year old son last week. I was hoping to give them some sort of comfort. Thank you for your support.

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