I Am Alive! ! ! Poem by Brittanie Thornton

I Am Alive! ! !



I am the smile that shines on a young face
I am the laugh that echoes through your ears
I am the blood pulsing through your veins,
I am the first kiss you receive
I am the message in the bottle,
I am the beat of your heart
I am the sweet, while you are the sour
I am the musical note stuck in your head,
I am the relief to your sigh,
I am the mystery in your eyes
I am the sweet smell to the rose,
I am the other hand held in yours,
I am the unforgotten scare in your past,
I am the dip to your chip
I am the giggle to your laugh
I am the thought always on your mind,
I am the fingernail scratching the chalk board
I am the blanket that keeps you warm,

You see, I am alive, I am alive,
I stand in good relation to God,
I stand in good relation with life,
I stand in good relation with hope,
I stand in good relation with my family,
You see, I am alive, I am alive.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Debra Kemper 16 April 2009

Very nice! Excellent imagery! Your word choice is very effective. What a nice picture you paint!

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SAM Mitsuki 14 April 2009

Awww 'I am the Dip to your chip' That is really cute. I really like it! ^~

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